Another great write but like before i have said you need to work in some stronger language and thats not a bad thing cause i need to work on it to. great write

"Watch a man mutilate his own brother
See a cop dealing coke to his mother
Watch him go home to his best friends lover
Theres Just no reason for me"

I absolutely LOVED this verse. its wicked!!! well done, ANOTHER amazing piece. keep it up hun.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Great imagery. I liked it. some stronger words would make it better, but its still a really good write.