Comments : Armageddon

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Very vivid and the imagery is great, a short poem to the point and another great write

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really beatifully written and your words are affective,especially this made me think this way

    Satan is free

    Keep on writing
    Take care of yourself
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Very good, its like a prelude to a fantasy novel, nice vocabulary

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Deacease and free. words i don't read too often. great short yet very dark poem.

    keep writing!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I love it. short, but it didnt need to be long. another wicked piece. keep it up.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by Coeur Cassa Sage

    WOW!!! That is awsome. Not that Satin is free...I meant the poems...:)

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Excellent imagery and word choices. A very strong piece pertaining to war. I hate war!

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was so simple but yet it painted pictures I couldn't alone think of. It was short and to the point. It also leaves me thinking, which is great. Great write!