Very vivid and the imagery is great, a short poem to the point and another great write |
by Tricky Daze
Really beatifully written and your words are affective,especially this made me think this way |
by Cattiebrie
Very good, its like a prelude to a fantasy novel, nice vocabulary |
by David
Deacease and free. words i don't read too often. great short yet very dark poem. |
I love it. short, but it didnt need to be long. another wicked piece. keep it up. |
WOW!!! That is awsome. Not that Satin is free...I meant the poems...:) |
by silvershoes
Excellent imagery and word choices. A very strong piece pertaining to war. I hate war! |
by x Mo x
That was so simple but yet it painted pictures I couldn't alone think of. It was short and to the point. It also leaves me thinking, which is great. Great write! |