From all the trouble that heâ??s seen this needs fixed, but other then that it is a good write and another great poem by you

Wow a great perspective,and i agree^^..Well done

Aww, i can really feel the emotion shining thru your words. it was brilliant.
much love and many kisses,
bex

Whoa this poem has so many desriptive words.

i thought that this would be a poem that no one could pull off and still want me reading. but this poem was awesome!

5/5 David

Awesome poem! Great choice of words and all. Brilliant.

The emotion in this poem was so real, so raw. it was great hun. well done!
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

AWESOME! it was a great write! im sure many would be able to relate to this poem for sure..for some ppl may have already lost their dreams and friends... really great write..and the ending was the best for me..5/5