Comments : Rescued

  • 17 years ago

    by Danai

    Wo0h! u're good! =)
    5/5 ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I could travel many lands to seek
    Someone that's strong and true
    But why must I look far and wide
    When I've found it all in you.

    An awesome ending. I loved this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    A soft romantic pen poem. Beautiful and uplifting.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    I could travel many lands to seek
    Someone that's strong and true
    But why must I look far and wide
    When I've found it all in you.
    ^^^
    A beautiful ending stanza, to complete a beautifully touching poem.
    A wonderful read Auntie, as always M'dear!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Amazing again. I feel like I should offer suggestions, but there are none. I merely comment to let you know your work is appreciated and read!
    Charisma*