Dying to Live

Good poem, short and to the point. The last stanza is slightly weak, but nothing to worry about. Each new line, you should capitalize, (or at least create some structure related). Great poem overall.

Alot of meaning in little words. Marvelous!!!
~*~Fading Memories~*~

This was short, but very deep and full of emotion. i loved it very much. you flowed nicely too. 5/5

~Kristina

I liked this one. I liked your word usage here. It made it unique. This had a pretty good flow, though in a few lines it wasn't nice as others. I feel like there could be more to it. Nonetheless, it's a great poem. 5/5

marcella

Something was a little weird on this poem but it was still good 5/5 = ] not sayign something being weird is bad it could actually be a good thing i dont know but i liked it