Well written and i like your imagery! you write well but mabye you should look into the language you use a poem like this needs stronger words although it is a great write

Yeah, was good. Nice meter. Wasn't sure the last two lines made sense together with no further explanation.
But good poem overall.

Some kinda short but meaningful
I like dark poems,but can't write one..
Good job

Ooh. i loved this, the words were perfect!!!!! great work bub.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I liked this poem. Lots of originality. Improvements...hmm...consider even more vivid imagry and flow, thats all i can think of

-Lord Rahl-

Something was a little weird on this poem but it was still good 5/5 = ] not sayign something being weird is bad it could actually be a good thing i dont know but i liked it

I liked this one. I liked your word usage here. It made it unique. This had a pretty good flow, though in a few lines it wasn't nice as others. I feel like there could be more to it. Nonetheless, it's a great poem. 5/5

marcella

This was short, but very deep and full of emotion. i loved it very much. you flowed nicely too. 5/5

~Kristina

Alot of meaning in little words. Marvelous!!!
~*~Fading Memories~*~

Good poem, short and to the point. The last stanza is slightly weak, but nothing to worry about. Each new line, you should capitalize, (or at least create some structure related). Great poem overall.