I liked the way you wrote this it was very good. 5/5 ill keep reading more of urs.

I like this poem for one reason actually there is a lot of reasons but I'll name one. The emotion it gives off is very deep and sad. i love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really liked this poem. 5/5 its very simple and direct.. good job. =]

Aww sad poem but very well written. i really like it a lot. and i can relate to the words you wrote. amazing job. 5/5

~Kristina

Whoa... loved the ending :)