Wow!
well, written dude.
i like the structure of the poem a lot!!!
some very good imagery as well!
keep it up.
5/5

With such amazing words that you wrote there i was stuck in that moment :) loved reading it :) 5/5

Great poem! it is really good! you are a great writer. almost every poem that i have read that you wrote has been great! 5/5

xoxo kisses