Cruel World

by Annabel   Mar 5, 2007


Cruel world,
Evil smiles,
Mocking laughter,
Menacing whispers
Peer through the darkness
And penetrate your mind.
Silence takes hold,
Confusion is the essence
With a dozen meanings to every phrase
Who knows the truth anymore?
Instabilities freeze the movement
As distrust takes pleasure
Inhabiting your placid heart.
The trickle of love,
Mixes with anger
And fear takes presence
Twisting love to an unmistakable hate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow amazing poem. It has a similar theme to one of mine and that is why it spoke out to me so much, your words were simple but screamed truth to the readers. I definately think this was excellent and well deserving on some recognition. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I loved love loved your use of vocabulary in this poem. it flowed so eloquently and I have absolutely no criticisms on it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked it really,good expression and tıuching
    Way to go
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Cruel world,
    Evil smiles,
    Mocking laughter,
    Menacing whispers
    Peer through the darkness
    And penetrate your mind.

    this is the strongest part of this poem to me, it gets straight to the point and over all a well written poem

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