Cruel world,
Evil smiles,
Mocking laughter,
Menacing whispers
Peer through the darkness
And penetrate your mind.

this is the strongest part of this poem to me, it gets straight to the point and over all a well written poem

I liked it really,good expression and tıuching
Way to go
See ya
Laura

I loved love loved your use of vocabulary in this poem. it flowed so eloquently and I have absolutely no criticisms on it. 5/5

Wow amazing poem. It has a similar theme to one of mine and that is why it spoke out to me so much, your words were simple but screamed truth to the readers. I definately think this was excellent and well deserving on some recognition. 5/5