Good job! I for one LOVE LOVE LOVE poems that rhyme but I'll make an ok for this one cuz It is what happens in a lot of on stage things. Keep on writting!

Wow, this is so amazing, you seem to just create the poems out of the air, (lol) i really love it, im adding you to my faves.
luv gabriella

This was excellent. i'm a bit partial because i, too am a singer. i've been in theatre all my life. you captured some moments very well! i chose this one because it reminded me of one of mine called, 'my voice'. you might like it, although our styles are quite different! 5 for you! i plan on reading more of your work! -beav