Awww dat is so sweet. i can reli relate 2 dis 1. i reli liked it, but dnt no a peom of urs i dnt like (lol). i luv da way all ur poems have so much emotion u can tell u reli care about wat ur writing. keep it up. 5/5
MazieX.

Awe this one made me smile :)) i give it 5/5

Hi stranger. It feels like i've been gone years and years and look how many poems i've missed from you!
I can't read the love ones cos i'm on the college computer, so i bee-lined in on this one.
And wow...
It's so gorgeous and you managed to fit a life story within your words, a snapshot of a changing relationship..
Excellently done sweets
5/5
*Gem*

I liked it a lot, but it seemed a little played out, the rhyms were predictable, yet tehre wasnt a definate rhym sceme. but the idea was good.

COMMENT # 3
aww... this is soo cute... the flow was off in some places but the emotion was overwhelming... you describe things very well in this poem... nice work