by The Black Rose Mar 5, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Darkness overcomes |
Brother please i know u have heard this a hundred times but life always carrys on if your dead or alive it doesnt matter it just keeps on living i had a lover once she was everything to me she got hit by a car and she was in hospital for ages i loved her but i culdnt see her i got real depressed and angry i wanted eevrything to be like it was before this i asked and screamed at god WHY HER? WHY NOW??? WTF HAS SHE DONE TO YOU?? i didnt believe in god i sumtimes dont now but im gunna tell u sumthing i would only tell a brother i love u and so many other people do BUT if u realy feel its your time to go and have thought it through and read my poem again then no one is stopping u from dying i will cry but i cant stop you and no one can stop u ur free but feel imprisioned i kno how u feel to some extent |
by michelle
Wow thats so sad. and yeah, deep. it makes me feel sad, like im part of the situation, and yeah. sadness. its really well written and structured though. |