Wow thats so sad. and yeah, deep. it makes me feel sad, like im part of the situation, and yeah. sadness. its really well written and structured though.

xox
shell

Brother please i know u have heard this a hundred times but life always carrys on if your dead or alive it doesnt matter it just keeps on living i had a lover once she was everything to me she got hit by a car and she was in hospital for ages i loved her but i culdnt see her i got real depressed and angry i wanted eevrything to be like it was before this i asked and screamed at god WHY HER? WHY NOW??? WTF HAS SHE DONE TO YOU?? i didnt believe in god i sumtimes dont now but im gunna tell u sumthing i would only tell a brother i love u and so many other people do BUT if u realy feel its your time to go and have thought it through and read my poem again then no one is stopping u from dying i will cry but i cant stop you and no one can stop u ur free but feel imprisioned i kno how u feel to some extent