Very clever, I like the acrostic. Actually in my opinion, writing something like this is very hard because I think apparent rhyme schemed poems are much easier to write and follow along, but for something like this, you kind of have to keep reading anyway. I'd like to submit one of my acrostic poems sometime soon as well. Much talent, keep it up. :]

Another very good acrostic poem joe, noticed you write alot of them, and they are all great, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

This was really good,I tryed one acrostic poem it didn`t rate as high as my others but I never knew why.I`d love you to read it and tell me what you think,its called "missing you" yours are very good.

I like how the title ties right into the poem. I love acrostic poems, I think its the best way to express something.

Without you near
I'll go insane
Talk to me please, for
Hours, minutes, and even seconds

You speak my mind. Seconds can feel like magic.
Great.

God i was right, you are an expert in acrostics, very nicely written, great job once again........
keep it up