Flowers [Haiku]
by Kristina Mar 5, 2007
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Pretty flowers grow |
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17 years ago
by Brittany C
Cool 5/5
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17 years ago
by I Love You
I like this Haiku! i think you did an amazing job on it.
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17 years ago
Short, but *makes hand gestures* you know. Oh well, anyways 5/5 anyways :D
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17 years ago
by kimara4955
Short but very nice to read. i enjoyed it. xxtake carexx
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17 years ago
by N J Thornton
This is a great attempt at haiku. They're harder than they look, aren't they?
I see you stuck to the traditional syylable count. You also carefully included the suggested break, which should happen after line one, or two, in this case after line two.
Quite a pretty image too.
Punctuation wouldn't go amiss though.
Thanks for sharing.
