Not A Day Goes By

by XxMoonLightxX   Mar 5, 2007


Not a day goes by,
That I have not thought of you,
After all this time,
I am still in love yes its true

I still wish on every star,
And I still cry every night
I only want to be with you,
And for you to hold me tight

The minutes turn into hours,
As the hours turn into days
But the pain is always there,
It never goes away,

Still every long day passes,
And I cry even more sorrowful tears,
Praying one day you will come back
And help me through my fears

If you ask me how I am doing
I would say just fine,
But the truth really is,
You are always on my mind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I agree with Unattractive.. You are a great writer, I really liked this stanza..

    "The minutes turn into hours,
    As the hours turn into days
    But the pain is always there,
    It never goes away,"

    You show so much emotion and write from your heart. As well as keep your viewers interested atall times. Keep up the good work.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    You are an EXCELLENT poet with definate potential. When I started on this site I was thinking that everyone was going to be completely raw and untrained but they aren't. I am adding you to my favorites list. Thank you for sharing. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this poem is amazing. i can definetly relate to it! great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Your pen flows with tears. A beautifully sad poem that reaches in and grips your heart. If I have read your profile correctly it says you are 13 years old. What a wonderfully woven piece for someone of your age. A definite talent you have sweets.
    Yake care and looking forward to reading more of your poetry
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really sad, but i can relate to it. you did such an amazing job writing it! it flowed so nicely! amazing job, keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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