Hun! you definitely under estimate yourself. you're more talented than you think. love your poem! thank you for your comment :)
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Hey this is excellent!!! you are such a beautiful and mature writer. your words reach deep within the reader, its amazing! keep it up

love, fellow poet,
Jasmine

Aww this is really sad, but i can relate to it. you did such an amazing job writing it! it flowed so nicely! amazing job, keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Your pen flows with tears. A beautifully sad poem that reaches in and grips your heart. If I have read your profile correctly it says you are 13 years old. What a wonderfully woven piece for someone of your age. A definite talent you have sweets.
Yake care and looking forward to reading more of your poetry
Luanne

Wow this poem is amazing. i can definetly relate to it! great job! 5/5

You are an EXCELLENT poet with definate potential. When I started on this site I was thinking that everyone was going to be completely raw and untrained but they aren't. I am adding you to my favorites list. Thank you for sharing. 5/5.

I agree with Unattractive.. You are a great writer, I really liked this stanza..

"The minutes turn into hours,
As the hours turn into days
But the pain is always there,
It never goes away,"

You show so much emotion and write from your heart. As well as keep your viewers interested atall times. Keep up the good work.
-Ally