by disturbed one Mar 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Teardrops on my guitar |
by Em
I love how this poem comes together so easily. Lovely flow, lovely style, 5/5. Em x |
The last stanza is most definitely the best. The only thing I could find that needed improvement was the flow of a few of the lines. Other than that you have written yet another great poem. Good job! |
by maria
I play guitar and i had to read this because of that and the song teardrops on my guitar. i loved it. its one of those things that r sooo sad there wonderfly. keep writing =) |
I like the title of this poem and it fits the poem perfectly i love it 5/5 |
Thankyou for your comments on my poems Distant and Boys Of Summer. Much appreciated. |