Hold My Hand

by Mousie   Mar 5, 2007


Holding your hand
You hold mine so slight,
Afraid to let go
Cling with all my might.

Squeeze it and tell me
You still love me so,
Brush it so softly
Caress it so slow.

Come on angel
I know that it's there,
I'm waiting, respond
Tell me you care.

Now you have grasped it
That's what I thought,
But you don't let up
My comfort you sought.

What is brewing
Inside your sweet head?
What kind of questions
After all that's been said?

But finally you speak
Soon all is okay,
Pull each other through
Nowhere we'll stay.

again, bored in chem class... inspired by something that happened between last night and this morning, hope this is good for you guys too!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww I love your love poems lol! they're filled with some much emotion and warmth i love it...

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heyloo.
    This was good I liked it.
    sweeeeeeeeeet.
    The flow was good which is what I love in a poem.
    & The idea was cute & I can relate.
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    How it`s about holding hands & you describing it so ... I don`t know the word for it, but it was good .
    I honestly don`t know what else to say >_<
    Just liked itt .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Very nice poem ..i love how its based on you too holding hands very nice imegery!!...

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i am so glad to read another great poem by the poet who i admire. great job once again, you always have this great talent of touching my heart with your great words and style. you are the best, keep it up, another 5/5 from me as a gift to tell you how much i love this poem.

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