Well, like the other one, this one is really good

Awesome poem i really liked it, i can tell you have an amazing talent. Keep it up and thank you so much for the comment they really make my day. Thank Shanik

Wonderfully written,you have really awesome work..keep it up!

I didnt like this poem very much im srry but it seemed way to forced with the rhyming!

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Okay. I'm sorry. I just simply can't take these apart because it's really hard to read this. I mean, I understand it. It's just the rhyme's were REALLY forced, and I mean each one. when every line rhymes like that its overwhelming for the reader. Also, when you have 3 lines, then 2 for the rest of the poem, then randomly add in 4, it doesn't suit the flow well. I would try not to do that if I were you, otherwise.. it was ok.