Thats a really sweet poem. i hope you gave this to your mum.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Very nice. Have you shown this to your mom? If not, I think you should. I'm sure she'd love it. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Third line--you're

anyway. its fine that your last poem was under three hundred, i appreciated the comment anway.

fyi--there were a few spots that i wanted to rhyme real badly, but i couldnt rhyme other parts. the structure needed to stay the same. nad i cant force my rhyming, otherwise...it dies...

thnks for the input. <33

this poem is really sweet. beautiful relationship you got there.

Third line--you're

anyway. its fine that your last poem was under three hundred, i appreciated the comment anway.

fyi--there were a few spots that i wanted to rhyme real badly, but i couldnt rhyme other parts. the structure needed to stay the same. nad i cant force my rhyming, otherwise...it dies...

thnks for the input. <33

this poem is really sweet. beautiful relationship you got there.

Awww thats so sweet!!! i love my mum too! have you shown it to your mum?? she would love it sooo much!!

xoxo Lucy

I have told you wat i think bout this poem already. it was so cute. i loved it fully. so much love. lovely in all aspects.

5/5 forever David

Nice poem.
It would be better if you would make up something else for 1st or 3rd verse.. For that rhyming thing I mean: strong, wrong.. But otherwise it's so cute and nice to read..
Good job! 4/5

I've always hated writing poems for my mom, because words could never explain what she's done for me, and what she will do. nor, what she means.
This is an excellent poem though, especially for a mother. :]
But, still.. I know this poem doens't explain what she really means to you. :]

But, you did a better job then just about anyone would.

5/5

Aww this is such a cute poem. i enjoyed reading this very much. its really good that ucan confide in ur mom, thats something really good. cuz most of us cant or dont want to for different reasons. i think ur poem is very inspring. keep up the good work. 5/5

Great poem. I really liked it alot.
Your a good writer.

~Chelsea

Very sweet and loving:) 5/5

Let me say one thing; You'll never have to, or be able to let go of your mother, or her memories.

Okay. :D
This poem was aboslutely great. I love my mom, so much.. I can never seem to write about her though. I can, but it never comes out right.. This seemed as if it did.
You did a great job.

5/5
Keep it up

Such a sweet poem kaila..you msut really love her...wonderful write...

5/5

Aww this poem makes me happy
happy to see know you guys have such a good relationship,
that how it is supposed to be
well done