Wow. Incredible!
I loved the imagery-- the second stanza was my favorite.

I'm not quite sure how to put this but the spacing was good. That probably sounds weird but what I mean is that you started new lines at the exact right spot.

And now you're probably really confused.

The point is, I loved this poem. It was absolutely excellent.

5/5

Well this was well finished. it was a bit long but i wouldn't want it to be any other way. well done!

5/5 David

The first stanza was off to a rough start but after you get going it is amazing.... you could take out the first stanza and it would be perfect... (without putting first stanza into judgement i'm giving you a 5/5)

Great piece, every stanza is amazing and the imagery is really powerful.
I like the ending.
5/5, well deserved

Oh my....lovely..

Great job!!! Like it!!!