Wow!!!!this is a gr8 poem. i can tell u put lots of emotion and thought into this. gr8 work!! keep it up nd take care
xx

Well firstly i loved the heading. made me want to read it, and the poem built up, and up. till the last 2 lines. the words you used were well used to cap off a great poem!

5/5 David

Wow, Hun! That was really really good! Such a sad story though. I really hope that this isn't true. The flow was really good & nothing seemed forced. Just remember to capitalize things. Like your I's & the beginning of every sentece. Also, try to use punctuation. :]

he stole my courage and dignity
my pride and self-security
my self-esteem and ambition
and than my will to carry on

^ Hunny, wow. This was my favorite stanza. It really stood out to me.. It was just so powerful & deep. I absolutley loved it.

Beautifully penned, dear.

Bri [x]

Omg!!! this is so sad you write so incredibly! I love this! wow

That was incredible, it flowed so gorgeously, 5/5
it was beautifully perfect
luv gabriella

This is very good. it seems to me like you put lots of emotion into this poem, it is absolutely amazing to me!

Amazing poem thats y it got hm in my contest

Mm the structure wasnt too great, but i was attracted to the words and the message. that part was just brilliant.

Wow, I really loved the words and the message, its a very sad, but beautiful poem, it has so much emotion in it, it was amazing.... 5/5

Wow, I really loved the words and the message, its a very sad, but beautiful poem, it has so much emotion in it, it was amazing.... 5/5

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

I've never been raped but i feel your pain through your words, very deep, i hope u pull thru,
keep going,
JAde

This poem is great I can tell you put a lot of effort into it and emotion ... I hope this didnt really happen to you ... 5/5 =]]

You put your deepest thoughts in this and i think that's what makes a lot of ppl great poets..they take they're deepest thoughts and apply them to paper..5/5
manda

Hi there Sweetpea ,

I hope that you got help for what happened to you ! I have not been raped but I do have a very close friend who it happened to and she left it for 8 years after it occured to do something constructive not for others but for herself , she called a rape centre and spoke to someone , she did also go for therapy and it helped but she made a choice she was not going to let him rob her of a good life ! She is no longer a rape victim but decided to become a rape survivor! Your poetry if hard hitting and very good at least you have an outlet for your feelings ! Get yourself some help though! I know its not easy but remember take it one step at a time , you are still young and you have a wonderful life ahead of you and things to look forward too!!!! Dont let that selfish piece of poo take that away from you coz then he has won!

Very sad but a very good write! keep up the good work and i hope that you can come to terms with what has happened to you.
god bless

Wow..a very powerful poem..I am so so sorry if you had to go through this..I'm assuming you did b/c you have to live it to write it so well. I know how you feel, and these things are so hard to overcome.. great poem though...5/5

Wow, i love it..;P

Woooooooooow i really love it
ful of sincer emotions you really expressed the idea so strong and in a very good and sensetive way
i love this write bravooo

Its now 2014, and this is still one of my own favourites. Good to look back and know that I did pull through, and Im not a victim anymore :)