I owe you anyway

by David   Mar 6, 2007


I owe you my soul
I owe you my life
You gave me a goal
That was to love you through all

But I failed you again
I knew that I had lost
Before it had began

I love you with all my heart
But now that we are over
I secretly never wanted to be apart

Yet we have stumbled and fallen
Into a world that does not know
And our love has been stolen

Please give me a sign,
So that I should know
That you want me to stay
And let our love grow

I cry all through the night time
I cry all through the day
I wish that you could be mine
And this is all I say

That I still wait for you
Every minute of the day
Ill wait till you walk into my view

Cause ive found the endings always
Come at last
That the endings always
Come too fast

Even if you dont love me
I will always love you
Even if you can not see
That what we had was true

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awwwww, such a touching poem!
    I love all off your poems, David, you are so talented. You really are!

    Take care, my sweet

    xxIngridxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow... this poem is soooo gut wrenchingly emotinal.. made me tear up a bit.. probably because I could relate to it so well... The poem in itself flows wonderfully, and the wording as superb as usual, but the message behind this, of such terrible sadness, it's overwhelming.. a great poem 5/5 as usual!!
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You seem to have a heartbreak theme in all the poems I had read.
    remember that there are other topics to write on but also remember that what comes from the heart is what makes a great poem. So that would be why you have a lot of heartbreak poems I assume
    4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    GREAT FLOW!! awesome flow man!! i loved it, you really have the emotion behind you 100% in your poems! i loved it man, another 5/5 from me!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Wow... this is forcefully sad. Definitely makes the reader think.

    Nice word choice and rhythm, though the flow is a bit off in some places.

    Still, I really enjoyed reading this poem so 5/5.

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