It's a v. nice poem .. cool .. i love it so much..
Tazke care :D

How your words are it is so easy to trust for some people that they really get their hearts broke.

Like a child who never care for life's danger
I used to sleep at night with my own thought
Never realized the pain of trusting a stranger
So i drowned under the pile of the pain i bought

This stanza says so much.
Excellent job Dost!
Cindy

I guess we all have paid the price for trusting strangers at some point of our lives ... its all a part of living. Your poem speaks for itself, so really, there is not much to say. Its a beautiful poem indeed. The last stanza is my favorite because even with all the pains, there is still hope, and you cant live without hope. Excellent write as always.

Wow... 110th poem. Congrats!!! You should publish a book. :-)

Love
Michelle

Aw so much emotion coming through in this poem. very well written. good job expressing urself. xx

That was a really emotional poem.
Great job.

Absolutely delightful!! Grats on a job well done:)

A very special piece indeed, lovely to read.

This poem was just so DKHJFSDf. I loved every single line. I just love the way you express yourself. This was flawless. I dunno what else I can say. I love it!! 5/5

` Liz

Very beautiful.

I nelieve somewhere out there, everyone or at least most of us have a soulmate. Sometimes it can be like trying to find a needle in a haystack. Best of luck in your journey. Good job!