A wall, my heart...

by xfAdInGxaWaYx   Mar 6, 2007


I built a wall
Around my heat
To prevent you
From tearing it apart

But brick by brick
You chipped away
And now it's gone
You better stay

You touch my face
I breathe in deep
I give you
My heart to keep

We are happy
For a time
Young, sweet love
I call you mine

But you tossed my heart
Not a care in the world
And threw it away
You laughed as I recoiled

One more time
I pick up
The shattered pieces
Of my broken heart

I slowly rebuild
What I have lost
Never again no matter
How much the cost

Will I give you
My heart like I did...

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  • 17 years ago

    by bethany

    I love the way you wrote this poem. at first i wasnt sure if i liked the topic but you worked it out. we;l done

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Wonderfully written.. Everyone is scared of getting their heart broken.. especially the people who are in love.. the fear of losing your love is the biggest fear of all.. i really loved the way you used the wall.. its so true xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww i like this one.. its so beautiful.. 5/5 great work
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Pretty good Pretty good. I liked it, it was written well and expressed the same way. 5/5 keep up the great work
    Check mine out

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautifully penned poem...and i can sooo relate!lovely work!!......kp it up!..5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

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