An amazing poem. such truth, i enjoyed it alot. i hope everything works out for you, i understand youmust feel so much pain, n life without the one person you love will never be the life you want, and i often think of giving up. but im glad i didnt. just beleive, xxtake carexx 5/5. would you please read a few of mine, i would really appreciate it.

Your poem was really touching. I hope you're either still together, or that (if you did go your separate ways) that things are good for you now. :) Its so hard in that time to think past anything further than 1 second away, but in the end we always manage (somehow) to pick ourselves up and start again and realise in the end that we are stronger that we give ourselves credit for! Take care and keep writing. xx

That is soooooo good, i love how deep and trueful it is and how it rythmes very good!!!

This is sooooooooo good!
i loved it its a favorite i relate to almost erry line its a great poem very appealing
whoever that poem is for should be happy they have you

I enjoyed this...it was beautifully written

I like this one. It's like I feel what you were feeling to write it.

This is a really great poem. i assume you are talking about the fact that the guy you love is leaving within the next year to join the marines. that has got to be really hard, and im sorry about it. my new boyfriend Seth who is 14, like me, is planning on leaving for the marines when he turns 18, and i dont know how im going to cope with that if we are still together by that time. stay strong!

~Chelsea

Very well Written..Great piece Of work..
This poem touched my heart sweety..I enjoyed reading It..5/5 u deserve it!
(P.s. If u have time..stop by my poems..and comment them..if u dun mind I will apperciate it..)
-sarah