Heartbreak Town

by Jenni Marie   Mar 6, 2007


There's this place people go
Where houses are falling down
Deserted cars line empty streets
There's no one else around.

Windows are shattered
Flames line the streets
So desolate and empty
Overpowering heat.

Shoulders are hunched
Eyes staring at the floor
Slow, agonizing steps taken
People can't take it anymore.

Tears frozen on faces
No tears left to cry
Silent words unspoken
All people do here is sigh

Pain screaming out
Yet it goes unheard
People here wondering
How their life got so absurd.

Aimlessly walking the streets
Without making a single sound
Yet screaming inside silently
Free me from this heartbreak town.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I adore your work. This poem is really good. Sad, also..*waaah waaahh*..You are so going on my favourites :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow i liked it so much especially those

    Tears frozen on faces
    No tears left to cry
    Silent words unspoken
    All people do here is sigh

    Because the flow and woriding was great
    Keep it up
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Probably my favorite love poem that I've read.

    People tend to forget there's two sides to love, and you've expressed the second, less popular one well here.

    The imagery practically screams at you in the first stanza, but the second stanza is my favorite.

    Loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Aimlessly walking the streets
    Without making a single sound
    Yet screaming inside silently
    Free me from this heartbreak town

    that was my favorite part, but the poem is so good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Tears frozen on faces
    No tears left to cry
    Silent words unspoken
    All people do here is sigh

    Oh, this was so sad. Nicely written.

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