This is really good.im not an american but independence day means alot to me and this sums it up well done 5/5 x

You did a really great job.
5/5

More patriotic than independence day but it was still good.

your servant:
david

Hey babe
i LOVE the colours you used in your poem!!! like loads of different colours it really made the poem perfect! the layout was fab too not only did it sound good but it looked good! =]
take care
Geo
xoxoxo

I'm not an American o.O but I can see where the pride comes from ^_^ I liked it