Wow this is great

That only makes me wonder more
about why I still hopelessly cling to the dream of
bettering myself.
Why I hope that someday I will be able to escape
this hell

i love this part
Keep up this great work
and remember you have to go through hell to get to heaven

I don't think you have to go through hell to get to heaven, but I do think you will.. appreciate? heaven even more if you went through hell... Good things come out of bad things, that's what I'm trying to say.. (I don't really know if I believe it myself, but still..) About your poem... I can't think of a word to describe it (and that isn't cliche) but.. Kat is right, it's great.