"I would climb the highest mountain
Swim across the deepest sea
I would stop the world from turning
If it brought you close to me"
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^ I loved those stanzas. This poem was so sweet. I dunno why it got such a low vote. Beautiful lines you wrote here. Never stop! 5/5

-` Liz

Decent poem...perhaps try a bit more originality.

"I would climb the highest mountain
Swim across the deepest sea"

Farily clique, give it your personal signiture. Oh and one more thing...give your life to no one...your love...but not you life.

-Lord Rahl-

Take away "Let me give my life to you..." You don't need it. If you fix the tense of the other part of the poem...it would be great by itself. I already like it without those two repetitive lines. =) Hopefully that didn't sound too mean!

There wasnt any real rhyming pattern but that didnt make the slighest bit of different.. this poem is beautiful. i just love it hun. i dont know what else to say.. well done.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Wow amazing poem you have written! i really enjoyed reading it! you did a wonderful job on writing it! keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

That is so sweet!

This is a beautiful love poem, Curtis. "Let me give my life to you," is phrased perfectly. That statement could easily lose its meaning with the wrong context, but you pull it off. A very strong write!