This was so heart wrenching. it was so well written, nothing was forced. i could read it with so much ease. well done once again hun. chin up.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Sad, but unbelievably beautiful!!
10/5 x)
Keep it up!

Aw thats sad.. very well written! I loved it because it caught my attention. The descriptions were well said and I think that you did a wonderful job! 5/5

I think the flow/beat could use a little work, but the rhyme scheme is great, and so is the topic.