by turtle Mar 6, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What turns a man on? |
by GoodMEMORIES
I thought that it was really good. I likeed your descriptions allot... i dont think that i have any critisim of negative comments, it was really good... |
ReallY a gooD writinG thaT attractS a loT witH betteR feelingS anS prettY gooD soundS... 5/5 |
by Michelle
I really like this! I admit the title had me expecting a more blunt piece but your rhyming somehow pulled it together quite nicely. I thought the structure and format was used well, and your descriptions were written both poetically and fitting. The rythm, I think, contributed a lot to the piece. I loved the first stanza (and the last line...I mean, we females ARE pretty magnificent). |