I really like this! I admit the title had me expecting a more blunt piece but your rhyming somehow pulled it together quite nicely. I thought the structure and format was used well, and your descriptions were written both poetically and fitting. The rythm, I think, contributed a lot to the piece. I loved the first stanza (and the last line...I mean, we females ARE pretty magnificent).

One thing, I think this line,
"Predicting what they're thinking, will undoubtedly challenge your intellect"
was too long and wordy and threw the rhytm off balance.

Other than that I thought it was an Excellent read. great job

ReallY a gooD writinG thaT attractS a loT witH betteR feelingS anS prettY gooD soundS... 5/5

I thought that it was really good. I likeed your descriptions allot... i dont think that i have any critisim of negative comments, it was really good...

5/5