Fly on the Wall

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Mar 6, 2007


Tears well in my eyes as I try to restrain myself.
My lips quiver as the anger pulses through my veins.

Nothing seems to be going right.
It's all just a mess.

I am but a fly on the wall,
As I watch this girl break down for no apparent reason.
Night after night.

Choking in something she knows not about,
She graps for air.

Yet, she can no longer breath.

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  • 16 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow really good how long have u done poems?

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Pretty good. I haven't read anything by you in a while. Very enjoyable!
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I loved how you made if just vague enough to let the reader take whatever they wanted out of it. Nice job, very short but very powerful. Sometimes its hard being the fly but sumtimes its important. thanx for sharing this with us all

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Short but extremely powerful write!
    I also think you chose the perfet title.

  • 17 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I really really liked this... you definately have a way of compelling the reader. VERY relatable. One question... did you mean "breathe" or "breath"?

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