In a Chamber of my Soul

This is an extremely meticulously written poem. Every word favours the last to create what I would consider somewhat of a masterpiece.

The imagery you use is flawless. My only criticism would be that it ends in perhaps too positive an ending. But, that is my own personal bias as I have a tendency to enjoy dark poetry. I think this would make an amazing sonnet.

Nonetheless, a standing ovation from me for the true sentiment in every word. 5/5.

Natalie.

Wonderful poem... So well written... I loved it...

This is beautifuly written. I can feel your pain so well through this. Continue writing and keep doing whatever you are doing because its working. This is a brilliant piece of poetry and I most definately love it. Kepp it up.

--Emily--

This is such a inperational poem....great use of vocabulary, u must of been feeling somthing really strong when you wrote this..i can connect to your feelings when you give great description like that

great job
your a true poet
Keep writing

~love to all my fellow poets~

~shannon~

"pray to God to bring the sunshine
sleep comes easier in the light"

Out of the whole poem, thats the most easiest to relate to.
At night in the dark, it's so easy for my night terrors to eat away at me, yet in the day, sleep comes so much sweeter
Amazing poem Lu, well done!
5/5
*Gem*