Dandelions chirp

by Melissa   Mar 6, 2007


I could lose myself
to the white noises of summer
and bask in it's birth
for quite a while really

Winter could never sneeze
her snotty season
over here where it's warm,
my limbs are golden in Sunny's arms
and these teeth no longer chatter
over still tundras of pain

I embrace yellow
with open heart
and spit out the blue

Freedom is no longer south of me,
it is here contemplating it's whereabouts
in a few months after June

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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love your word choices! Especially this verse:

    Winter could never sneeze
    her snotty season
    over here where it's warm,
    my limbs are golden in Sunny's arms
    and these teeth no longer chatter
    over still tundras of pain

    After this long Winter....gives a glimpse of Spring to come! Well done!
    All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh, I just love the words you used in this one.... very descriptive. Beautiful write, love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Ir is winter for me here in Canada but I felt as if the sun's warmth wrapped around me after reading this piece!
    You originality captivates me every time i read your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Flowed very well and love your choice of wording.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like this-you captured the seasons so well and of course in your unique wording/style. Though still caught in snow here, this poem takes me to the other seasons in my mind. Really love your phrasing/images, especially the last stanza.
    Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
    Gary J

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