The whole poem was great but the last stanza was the best great job
Take care
xoHsxo

Very nice! loved the wording, the flow, the meaning, graet poem 5/5

This poem was really great. It was filled with emotion.

Wow! this was amazing! great write! I loved all of the images conjured in my mind! simply superb, keep up the great work. 5/5

Your description in this poem was amazing! stunning. the story it told the reader was great.

keep writing plz

all in all a great poem! 5/5 David

Your grasp on rhyme is so strong, it really impressed me. The language wasn't overly poetic, and the rhymes seemed to serve the purpose only of making a nice beat and flow at the end of each line/stanza. But I don't feel this was a negative issue, i quite liked it.
The abstract idea of burning blue was a nice thought, but was too contradicting for my liking. They are so different and I didn't know what image to think of; for me it was a muddled portrayal...
Overall though, a good write. Thanks for sharing.

An amazing poem full of emotion, an other great work of yours =)
love it 5/5

Wow. This poemj was an amazing read i really really enjoyed it. I loved the repition of "Your soul's a burning shade of dark blue" it bought out the effect of it brilliantly! The rhythem and flow were good and the rhymeing was also great! The descriptions and imagery created were great, the emotion was real. An excllent read, keep writing! xx

I've already read this poem, and like i said before, it was amazing, keep up the great work!

Another wonderful poem here. You are a very good writter. I loved the repitition of the first line in every stanza. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Again another great poem and also the re-used line
Your soul's a burning shade of dark blue
adds to it in general, you have a lot of talent and the emotions you have in your poems are exceptional, i love reading your poems, im adding you to my favorites so i can read some more later, keep it up 5/5

Wow, I loved the descriptions in this, they were full of emotion. The flow was good and I liked how you repeated the first line. Your vocabulary added effect to the poem and I enjoyed the read. Nicely done 5/5

This poem is amazing.
Love your choice of words.
5/5

~Chelsea

I love how you reuse the first line of every stanza. And I love the descriptive wording.

Words can not describe how much I love this...
I am completely blown away...
A perfect opener, each stanza better than the last, an ending with great impact.
I liked the repitition, I thought it worked very well.
Wording was beautiful, imagery created vivid pictures and the flow was flawless.
I LOVE it!

This was really good!!! I'm glad you picked this as one of your poems for my contest prizes, I enjoyed reading it!!!

Thanks! 5/5
Allanah

I didn't expect the poem to be about a soul by the title, so that was awesome I like when I expect something totally different than what is to be assumed by the title =)

"So together we'll conquer the world outside
The same dark soul, the same new aim "

^^ I loved those lines! I don't know, they just stood out to me, and it was a great ending. ^_^

Oooh, pretty. I thought it was a great read. The imagery was lovely. If I do say so myself. Well-done.

Happy writing-

Yet another great work of art!

Josie

I loved the repatiton in the poem and how each line was better then the last. The imagery was spectacular and I could picture them in my head. Excellent job 5/5 P.S. were even for now lol