I like this one. It's kindof like "we're one in the same so it doesn't really matter, So we should be together forever thing!" Its pretty good!

I liked the poem. It was actually really impressive, one thing you could possibly work on is the wording...because people think oh thats a good word or oh I never thought of that they lose track of the thoughts your thinking and that makes it feel less potent and emotional. Quite effective though, no disputing that people clearly enjoyed it. Well done.

In the 2nd line of the first stanza, 'constently' should be 'constantly'. It would've been better if you used punctuation but i really have no room to talk because i don't use punctuation either lol.

In your 3rd stanza, the flow seemed a bit off because the 2nd line was too short compared to the other 3. Also, the rhyming seemed a little forced in lines 2 and 4 of that stanza.

'almost nearly completely'
^That was kind of a weird line.

It wasn't bad but I've read better poems from you. There were many instances when the rhyming seemed force, as did your wording. It was alright.

Dark Blue is the name of a Jack's Mannequin song, but i like this much better. xD Brilliant wording, brilliant imagery, brilliant form. Bloody brilliant.

I love the variety of words,and ure understanding of this type of person...who hides themself because their misunderstood or wtvr why...you're really talented,I like your work.

An amazing poem...

Brilliant... =]

5/5
.:Hammy:.
xx

It's very well worded. I really like the repetative opening lines.