Sweet Immortal Begun

by The Queen of Spades   Mar 6, 2007


She is unlike any other
With her silky blonde hair pulled tight
Yet soft wisps still stray away
To prove independence
Her song is that of a hymn untold
With a strange beat unheard of
Underneath a voice of despair and depth
Her gaze shines brightly
Through dull, relentless eyes
That seem to burn, burn
Through the air
Through the life
Through the earth
She is a conception of all imperfection
But in her reverie, ever immortal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Wow! You are a great poet! Have you tried writing a poem/story..?.. you know its like a short captivating story but the whole thing is a poem? Usually they are 2-5 pages.. I think you could make a really outstanding one! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Ooh i really enjoyed this one. i loved the choice of words!
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Your poems dont leave me with much to say. They are just enjoyable to read. Keep it up.

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