Comments : Sweet Immortal Begun

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Your poems dont leave me with much to say. They are just enjoyable to read. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Ooh i really enjoyed this one. i loved the choice of words!
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Wow! You are a great poet! Have you tried writing a poem/story..?.. you know its like a short captivating story but the whole thing is a poem? Usually they are 2-5 pages.. I think you could make a really outstanding one! 5/5