I apologize for your mistakes

by Sorefromreality   Mar 6, 2007


I could scream for hours on end
and u wouldn't give a damn
Pardon me and my screaming
You're only BREAKING MY HEART

Geez I'm sorry that u lied
Give me a chance to apologize
It's all my fault, please take me back
And please pull your knife out of my back

the words u scream at me are rather harsh, don't u think?
especially considering u were the one lying
here, let me shine your shoes for u
is there anything else that i can do for u?

I see u staring at that girl
Don't mind me, u are only my WHOLE WORLD
neglect my painful mumbling,I'm only overreacting
Go ahead and kiss her, my heart is only cracking in two

I'll be there when your life falls apart
Even though u are slowly breaking my heart
Here is your daily lie, served up nice and warm
Don't bother telling the truth, u don't like to conform

Pardon my eyes, if they start to well up
I promise not to let my tears land in your cup
I could be on knees, with my mouth open,
But to CRY in front of you?
That's the absolute worst thing I could do.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    It has a very odd flow ...
    but i like it .

    its definitely unique from all the other poems I've read .

    i can feel your pain bursting out of this poem . the sarcasm was a nice effect .

    great job . and keep up the great work .

    xoxo ;; LAURiEE`

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Hmm.. This is an interesting poem. I like the sarcasm in it, it is definately a unique way of writing what you were feeling here, and I can definately feel your pain. The only thing that puts me off is that the rhyming scheme changes in each stanza and the lines are very differing in lengths at some points. But the main thing for me is the rhyming, I just personally think that if someone should bother to rhyme, it should rhyme, and have the same rhyming scheme the whole way through. Just my opinion, but I like what you were trying to say and how you put it across.

    Tammie xo

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