by The Queen of Spades Mar 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Trapped, I've come to be |
This was really sad and yet really beautiful. Your "ever after" is definitely out there and he'll sweep you right off your feet. |
Really sad, but beautiful. Sometimes the flow is a little off, but the meaning is so strong it stays really good. So beautiful, you're really talented! |
Wonderful "comparison" of sorts, great rhyming, fabulous flow... I loved it. |
I love the rhyming you usd in the poem, and I love the comparison. |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, reading this i do agree, you made me think, this life is basecly a movie nothing else. it will end no matter a happy end or a sad end, all it matter is it does end one day. nice word and nice poem, i really enjoyed reading it, specially the word MOVIE where you took me to a different world of thinking. |