The commitment!

by PURE HEART   Mar 6, 2007


The love between us has reached the limit of sky,
its not just love, its an unbreakable tie.
We sacrificed, we adjusted and are not yet apart,
coz we loved each other from the core of our hearts.

To be together, is what we promised to ourselves,
facing every trend, any misunderstanding if dwells.
Let our trust, our faith makes our love bolder,
its just efforts we need to build it stronger.

Just be there, close to me, and leave me never,
hug me, kiss me and hold my hand forever.
I want to live with you, feel you and love you more,
now you are a part of my life, my body and my soul.

My future cannot be imagined without you my dear
I want to live together, so close, so near.
The honest commitment is all what I want from you,
and love me always the way today you do.

Promise me you will never leave me alone,
you know i believe in you, the strength in you I hold,
We will give this relationship a pure name,
we call it our dream and people call it a wedding game...

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  • 15 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow!

    i havnt been on this site for so long but its soo good to be reading your great writes yaar.

    beautiful!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...lovely and sweetly warm

  • 17 years ago

    by Rakesh

    Hey a very nice from..straight from the heart..WOnderful reading :)

  • 17 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Hey yaar,,
    how r u?
    its been ages since i read any poems..
    miss tlking you ya.,..hope your good..
    :)
    tkcare

    sonam

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    I don't know whether they call it a wedding 'game' or not but anyways it's a good emotional poem... Nice to see you back.