Myth

by sibyllene   Mar 6, 2007


Little nymph, you call me
I am cool and white, bathing in your smile
while you hover above, a crouching woodland Pan
roguish in your grin, and wild,
flecked with the gold of light
through dappled shadows

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NicE poeM.
    VerY truE.
    EnjoyeD readinG iT.
    TakE carE...

    LUZAn

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wonderful, truly wonderful. I like the mythological theme, and the words you used.
    I like when the poem is short but so powerful.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Short, but has a lot a good meaning. I liked it.

    And I wouldn't say that I wrote my poem like that intentionally. I don't focus on rythm, or style or anything. I just get my words out, and I'm happy, however they may come out. So, I stick with it.

    Thanks for the comment though. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    M. When you brought up Pan, I was a bit lost. However, I like the mythology connection. Your writing is unique (I've looked over a couple of other poems, but I didn't want to leave a one liner since I didn't know what to say...).

    Thanks for the comment.

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