Comments : First Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by *~"Hot Chocolate" author*~

    Beautiful the epitome of poetic! I loved it.
    I pine, I perish, I shake, I sigh!

  • 17 years ago

    by kim

    Wow! ur amazing! this gave me shivers! and i just LOVED IT!....and it is exactly the way i feel - swear u read my mind! keep up the amazing work 5/5!