Another Picture To Burn [Terzanelle]

That was.... amazing, so well written, and I really like that form of poem. My favorite line is How Pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn... that whole line is so true, so powerful and makes you really think. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the amazing work!

Ok.. the subject of this is something i wish you hadnt had to go through.. but at the same time.. i love this poem. i love the flow and the way you organized it. Good job!

Well, that was one hell of a poem. From the presentation all the way down to the wording was brilliant. Nicely done ^_^x

[[Shh]]= [(Shh)] it just looks cooler personally lol!

Flutter, flutter [fly away into the wind].= personally, i love that line yet i hate it...although it is kind of hard to explain... Corny yet... true.

Reality crumbling beneath your feet. = perfect line! I love that.... may i use it in a poem of my own?

How pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn. = resonating and strong ending. Perfect strength and awesome job! I love that line especially.

Thought-provoking poem! Great job once again!

5/5
~Stephen White

I liked this poem! I think you used some terrific words and I loved the flow and the meaning was good to it was very original