by .K.i.T.t.Y. Mar 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Believe me if i could, |
by Annabel
I could hear someone whispering I love you in my ear! i think you should put I love you x 3 at the end ... maybe its just me but i think that feels right (Y) 5/5 tho brilliant! |
by Daz Mellow
WOW! That is so true and really great. :) Great job. |
AWW!! i loved this! i loved the last verse! "Every breath i take, i take it for you". this was so great hun. keep it up! |
by Goran Rahim
Anothe great poem by the great poet, keep up the great work like always, i will be waiting for your new poems. |
by Cella Bella
This was nice to. The repetition suited this poem well I think. You wrote it beautifully. Nice write, 5/5 |