This was nice to. The repetition suited this poem well I think. You wrote it beautifully. Nice write, 5/5

marcella

Anothe great poem by the great poet, keep up the great work like always, i will be waiting for your new poems.

AWW!! i loved this! i loved the last verse! "Every breath i take, i take it for you". this was so great hun. keep it up!
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

WOW! That is so true and really great. :) Great job.

I could hear someone whispering I love you in my ear! i think you should put I love you x 3 at the end ... maybe its just me but i think that feels right (Y) 5/5 tho brilliant!